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Jerry the Human Comic 1 by EvanPearTree Jerry the Human Comic 1 by EvanPearTree
Finally, a look I am satisfied with. Constructive criticism would be appreciated.
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RoyalDeath Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009
like the drawing, love the quotations too, i love that kind of humor, kind of remembered me JTHM from Vazquez.

is there more to come from Jerry the human? hope so! :)
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EvanPearTree Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009
I love JTHM. I was addicted to it about a year ago, so some of my comic humor is pretty reminiscent of it. I came up with the name Jerry the Human around that time, which is very similar (JTHM-JTH), but that's just coincidence :D

And yes, there will be many comics to come! I appreciate it :D
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RoyalDeath Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009
well... if theres more comics to come! you are now under my watch! hahahaha i want to see that! hope they come soon :)

and i was addicted to it too, fucking LOVEEEE vazquez ... i mean... his work hahaha. bought the first season of invader... shame they canceled the second :( that made me really sad!

keep on with the good work dude.
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EvanPearTree Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009
Invader Zim was the best cartoon ever. I wish they still had shows like that on Nickelodeon nowadays... *sigh

Anyway, thanks a lot for the watch!
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raashad Featured By Owner May 22, 2009
To start with, I really like Jerry's look and expression, especially in the first panel. Your use of bold colors and the blurred out background work well with this style of comic, though the red for the table doesn't seem to fit so well (too close to the brick, blood, etc). On second thought, the red might be fine. It's a matter of experimenting.
Other than that, just a few minor issues. The girl's mouth should probably be open somewhat in the first panel, since she is talking. Also, the blood splatter on her hair kinda looks like a question-mark, which confuses her reaction in the last panel.
Seems really good overall, what resolution are you working in?
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